as he lies on the floor, with his head in his hands, surprising how much, this boy can withstand. I made him bleed, for the things that he's done, to see this boy crying, I know that I've won. seeing rivers of crimson, escape from his arms, the reason he's crying, and bleeding -- self harm. deep down I feel sorry, and I know you agree, this boy that is crying, and bleeding.. is me. |
Author's Comments
This poem is initially seen as me attacking a boy and making him suffer by crying and bleeding after the injuries I've given him. But as you continue to the final two verses, you see that the boy is not another person -- it is me.
Originally called "Attack me". |
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Love me, like me, come ahead and fight me, Please me, tease me, go ahead and leave me.
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But as for me,
I'm not far behind,
With this blade in my hand,
And this poem I've signed.
Andie Davies ~ Writing poetry for kids to cut themselves to..
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The Gothic Pixie© ~ I'm just a stone in societies path.........
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Love me, like me, come ahead and fight me, Please me, tease me, go ahead and leave me.
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But as for me,
I'm not far behind,
With this blade in my hand,
And this poem I've signed.
Andie Davies ~ Writing poetry for kids to cut themselves to..
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But as for me,
I'm not far behind,
With this blade in my hand,
And this poem I've signed.
Andie Davies ~ Writing poetry for kids to cut themselves to..
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Em <33
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But as for me,
I'm not far behind,
With this blade in my hand,
And this poem I've signed.
Andie Davies ~ Writing poetry for kids to cut themselves to..
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